Unable but desperate to find a dom who will put up with him, Sherlock swallows his pride and turns to Mycroft for help. Shortly after, John Watson steps into Sherlock's life.Words: 51919...
|Title||:||shames and praises|
|Format Type||:||Online fiction|
|Number of Pages||:||120 Pages|
|Status||:||Available For Download|
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shames and praises Reviews
This fic had great potential, but the author tends to over explain pretty much everything (bags under your eyes? Not enough. Next sentence explains that he had trouble sleeping). This has two effects. One, as a reader I'm not trusted to think for myself. And the writing appears wordy. Also, Sherlock is hard to pull off. Here, his thoughts are too one dimensional
Sherlock and John are in a D/s universe where Sherlock is a sub and John is a dom. Mycroft is a dom, Anderson too; Lestrade and Mrs Hudson are subs. Johnlock has a great relationship dynamics. I think Sherlock as a sub is hard to pull and the author managed to create a believable D/s relationship for someone as arrogant and independent as him. John is just the right balance of domineering lover and regular -equal- friend. I enjoyed the book immensely. I was surprised at every turn and I stopped trying to predict John's response to Sherlock's resistance to his innate nature. Entertaining as hell!